My cover band did this song back in the 90's. Consequently, I have come to despise it for the mindless piffle that it is.
HOWEVER, that's not the point. The point is, your refreshed, imaginative version kind of makes me like it again. It's very well mixed, nice separation, and it's probably my goofy brain tonight but it seems a little . . . I dunno . . . dark? Something a little sinister? Maybe it's the creepy tremolo guitar you've added . . . and the background organ? It's actually creeping me out a little. Picture this performed by a bunch of Chuckie dolls.
Oh well. nice job! as usual!
-Tom