Hi, James,
Very moving and emotional song with heartfelt vocals and meaningful lyrics!
Tim's voice sounds wonderful as always, the vintage keys sound nice, your guitar solos are tastefully done and the guitar tone is rich sounding and perfect for the song.
My only suggestion would be to slightly raise the level of the instrument part that comes into the left channel at around the :45 second mark because the keys sort of overwhelm it throughout. It almost sounds like a nylon string guitar or other string instrument, but I can't quite make it out. But, then again, maybe my ears are shot after a couple hours of mixing.
Anyway, it's always great to hear something new from you and Tim, and this is another winner! Please convey my sincere condolences to Tim on the loss of his Grandfather.
Best Wishes, James!

Bob