It sounds good.  I think if it were mine, I'd work awhile on bar 5 ... whether it might be possible NOT to go into repeat mode so soon. 

I like what you got so far!  Sounds like into movie theme material.  If you had said it was from a movie I would have believed you!  Check out The Secret Lake if you get a chance. 

This is quite nice. You have all the parts that make this work. The countermelody is low and it seem to go nowhere but as said, it is a great start. Now the trick is to combine ideas with a solid transition.
 
Well done!

I like what you've done with this so far. Keep going with it and expand the idea! I want to hear the full composition! Maybe complete the musical thought you have now and then add a transition to an alternate melody or bring in a minor key. I know this is in at an early stage, but I might consider adding some ambiance to the piano and moving it back in the virtual stage a bit. Just a thought.
 
Composer's Cloud is great, isn't it? Are you use Symphonic Orchestra or Hollywood Orchestra? Really sounds great.