Niiiiice, rich, full guitar sound. Vibrant and clean. I like it!

+1 to the above..  I really like your playing, a lot.  The main melody and additional parts work well together.
 
Mix-wise I think the side-chain delay technique is worth a try just for some clean up.   I don't think the drums are bad, but Dan's suggestion to use percussion instead; e.g., congas, shaker, etc., might even fit better.    I would also replace the bass patch with something "rounder", maybe even an acoustic bass patch if you have one. 
 

Guitars sound really great, no doubt. Fantastic first effort!
 
the bass is the problem for me. In what could pass for your chorus section, the bass starts doing a country style move,1 to a lower 5, 1 to a lower 5. I dunno, I just thought some of those notes weren't well chosen or didn't seem to support your melody at that point. I'd agree to a warmer sound if you can manage it on your bass, the roundwounds are kindy sproingy for your awesome mellow guitars.
 
just my .02. holy cow, really great guitar playing, I thought of Chet as well.
 
cheers,
-Tom