Mark - thanks! The morph section did take a while to get right so I'm happy to know that it's working! I actually did HPF the vocal track, but perhaps I need to refine the frequency cut-off.
Andy - yes, it is a bit smashed together.

The dual style thing is a first for me but certainly was fun to do. I am glad you liked it. I knew the vocal library was a keeper from the start so I just had to do
something with it... Glad you liked the image too - Google searching for pics based on vague descriptions is a wonderful thing.
Tom - thanks for the feedback. I knew the kick was a bit punchy and up-front, but every time I tried backing off I didn't like it as much. Perhaps a little MDynamicEQ is in order... For the instruments in the first part, it's mainly a combination of a few acoustic guitar parts and a Kontakt harpsichord, with four electric guitar tracks layered lightly in the background. I did intentionally leave the timing (mostly) alone because I wanted a bit of contrast against the tighter 21st century bit. And yes, I think the vocal library has a great feel to it even if it is nondescript!