Great playing/performance Mark. As others have said, the other instruments just need to be brought up.....James nailed it.
Looking forward to the remix as well. 

Nice!  Great version...  
 
Mix-wise it's already been said - more balance between the vocals/drums and instruments, and a bit more bottom end needed.  When the toms come in the lows seem OK, so I think it's mainly the bass itself and perhaps more thud for the kick (which is nicely punchy as is). 
 

Nothing I can add that hasn't already been said. Definitely worth a remix though...
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Sorry I have been remiss in responses, have been slammed at work and also had a plumbing incident at the house over my music room so had to evac all my equipment for repairs.....  In any event here is an updated mix based on feedback above.  Also posting the link at the top of the thread along with the previous mix.  Thanks for the suggestions.
 
 
Remixed Version 10/7/2015
http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=13226778&q=hi&newref=1
 
Regards

Sorry to hear about your plumbing incident......(I just replaced a toilet that always seemed to be clogged.....no more plungering...YAY!!!).
 
Anyway Mark, I have to say this new mix is just SPOT ON!!! It's night & day (I listened to the old mix first and then this one). Now, everything sounds upfront, loud, and clear......mixed & performed very well!! Excellent work....this is a keeper (in my book). :)) 

That's got it Mark, excellent! Nailed it.
 
MGC has a great voice, even reminiscent of Ray Wilson who sang with Genesis for one album.

Mesh - Appreciate the re-listen and comment.   Good to hear that everything is in its' place.   Glad you got your plumbing issue sorted as well:)   It is a real pain to deal with that kind of problem.
 
James - Appreciate you stopping back to check the newly updated mix.   Very happy to hear it is meeting expectation.   I agree on the singing, very good job.
 
Thanks to everyone for the comments after the first mix was posted for the excellent suggestions.   Made all the change updates that were commented on and a few other additions.  Used Wave's Center to push the guitars and keyboards busses out to the side a bit more.  Also added the UAD Ampex ATR-102 2-Track Tape to the Master output which added a nice touch to the mix.  Appreciate it.

Regards
 
 

i didn't hear the original mix but this sounds great - vocals are the shizzle -  really nice.

Daryl-Thanks for the listen, appreciate it.
 
Regards

Hey Mark
Man I love me some Genesis and this is one of the great ones!
 
I didn't listen to the old mix, just the new one, however, I personally think the vox and snare AND the toms are too loud in the mix.
performances are all excellent, including the vox; very nice!
if you are going for a faithful repro, I'd revisit that arp, the sound is not quite what Banks used from my recollection...
 
sounds and performances are fantastic!