NEW MIX UP WITH JAMESG1213 ON GUEEEETAAARRRRRR....! -SLF
 
HTTP://WWW.TRUSTMEDIA.TV/IRON_HORSE.mp3
 

Shawn, I'm not hearing a balance or spread of all the different instrumentation and effects. Very loud on the music, guitar way up front and effects setting way in the background where you can hardly hear them. You need to focus and get all the elements into there right space (spread them out), get each track balanced and volume corrected and clear, then master for total clarity where all tracks are clearly heard in their respective place in the piece. Nice choices of instrumentation and effects so far. A good work in progress.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

updated re-birth mix, went back to the drawing board!
 
http://www.trustmedia.tv/IRON_HORSE.mp3
 

All I hear now is the native indian(?) sample and drums on my cell phone until the end. That sample is too loud and wide overbearing the instruments, needs it's own space. Need to hear the energy.

Working on it, still going to be putting James G's guitar in there again...I'm having fun it's challenging and good!
 
-Shawn

Shawn, if you're going to use my guitar part, it would be nice to hear a mix before it's posted. Collab Courtesy. Thanks.