Vocals are pretty rich and wonderful. Nice job!
 
The reverb on the snare/drums in general doesn't quite match up with the fairly dry piano. They don't really sound like they are all in same room. I'd be tempted to dry up the drums.
 
thanks for the share - really well sung!
 
-Tom

Like Tom said little less reverb on the snare but other than that you seem to have something reasonable cool going on, thanks for sharing. 

Good song. the slow pace develops power as it goes along. Not sure exactly how much "help" Band In A Box gives you, but you have a better selection of instruments in Sonar. Your vocal is good -- you've got a little gravel in it I'd like to hear more of. I really like this style, and I look forward to your future projects. Like I said, I don't know anything about BIAB, but you play an instrument, right? If so, see what you can do in Sonar.

Hi,
 
Really nice work on this!
 
Great job on the songwriting, arranging and especially the excellent vocals.  Perfect voice for this style of music and a nice clean mix.
 
I agree with Tom and Wookiee about maybe changing the reverb on the drums to possibly make the overall mix gel a little better, but effects are always a subjective choice.
 
Great stuff!
 
Have a good one,
Bob

Mesh
Very well done Lawrence on the composition, vocals, and clean/clear mix........your vocals fit the style very well and as the song kept going, your voice warmed up nicely. I'd like to hear the bass a bit louder in the mix as that'll fill the low end a bit more .....but, that's just my personal taste. 
 
Enjoyed this very much (all 3 times)  :))

Thank you for taking a listen glad you liked it.  I'm always revisiting the mix so I'll pay attention to the bass.
 

synkrotron
 
Thanks , it's always nice to know what peeps are doing to create their art . I wasn't sure if you were perhaps playing some lead guitar. I've not used BIAB before, but I heard what other peeps are doing with this amazing song writing tool.
 
Nice song you created too... I like your vocals
 
 cheers
 andy

Andy thank you glad you enjoyed it.

emeraldsoul
Vocals are pretty rich and wonderful. Nice job!
 
The reverb on the snare/drums in general doesn't quite match up with the fairly dry piano. They don't really sound like they are all in same room. I'd be tempted to dry up the drums.
 
thanks for the share - really well sung!
 
-Tom

Thanks for the feedback.  I'll check out the verb a bit closer.
 

Wookiee
Like Tom said little less reverb on the snare but other than that you seem to have something reasonable cool going on, thanks for sharing. 

Thank you for listening and taking time to comment.
 

Larry Jones
Good song. the slow pace develops power as it goes along. Not sure exactly how much "help" Band In A Box gives you, but you have a better selection of instruments in Sonar. Your vocal is good -- you've got a little gravel in it I'd like to hear more of. I really like this style, and I look forward to your future projects. Like I said, I don't know anything about BIAB, but you play an instrument, right? If so, see what you can do in Sonar.

Larry, thank you for listening and commenting.  BIAB is one of the tools that I use.
 

Bob Oister
Hi,
 
Really nice work on this!
 
Great job on the songwriting, arranging and especially the excellent vocals.  Perfect voice for this style of music and a nice clean mix.
 
I agree with Tom and Wookiee about maybe changing the reverb on the drums to possibly make the overall mix gel a little better, but effects are always a subjective choice.
 
Great stuff!
 
Have a good one,
Bob

Bob, thank you for the feedback and for taking time to listen.

very cool Gruverider - I hope you don't mind the comparison but your voice reminds me of Elvis Costello - no bad thing in my book.

Very nice tune and vocal performance. I enjoyed greatly.  Love that Delta Queen pic, I live right on the Ohio river and seen her go by many times.

That's a good song.
 
Regards,
Kane

daryl1968
very cool Gruverider - I hope you don't mind the comparison but your voice reminds me of Elvis Costello - no bad thing in my book.

I don't mind at all.  Thank you for stopping in for a listen
 

ohgrant
Very nice tune and vocal performance. I enjoyed greatly.  Love that Delta Queen pic, I live right on the Ohio river and seen her go by many times.

I'm glad you liked it. Thank you.
 

audiomyth
That's a good song.
 
Regards,
Kane

Thanks for taking time to listen and comment.

Very cool vibe with great slide work. Dug it a lot!