hey, Tom
I didn't read all of the comments before posting this, so if it's already been said, then feel free to ignore the heck out of me!
I didn't like that the noise from the voice over went away between the voice over bits, it sounded unnatural that way.
the low mids are muddy in this and the bass is as well. I'd suggest notching some of that out and give the bass some clarity. the reverb could probably use some high pass also to clean up that lower end.
the piano sounds like it's in a different space than everything else - the verb on it is very different from the strings, drums, bass
ha! hoe down in the middle! love the fiddlin'!
but that piano verb is really distracting to me
and the noise on the voice over or lack thereof in other places.
cool tune, very creative! fantastic playing!
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