Hi friendly forum folks
Here's a song that I've had hanging around for a while - finally got round to finishing it. 
https://soundcloud.com/skyblueproductions/drink-mastered
Comments and criticism welcome.
Thanks

Daryl,
 
Good song and nicely produced.  I think you need to bring up the lead vocals a bit.   Also, the Pizzi strings in the intro are a bit loud.  Otherwise, it sounds really good....
 
Regards

I like it. The production is great, owlcity meets enya. I ike the different topic
 
Marks point is good, you could up the vocal a db and down the hihats/shaker a db.
 
Cian

A nicely produced song, quite a catchy tune. Good stuff.
 
I do agree those pizzicato strings could do with coming down a notch, not much mind you.

Very, very clever and witty.  I like this mix and your vocal performance.  You have a knack for writing good, melodic tunes that fit your voice like a glove.  Nice job, Daryl!

Cool tune Daryl, and superb production as usual.  Really enjoyed it.

No crits from me Daryl... That was a pleasant little ditty. Thanks for the lyrics too

nice song and sounds great.
agree the left hats are a few tenths too loud, taking that down might let that vocal through enough.
they sound great, but personally would take a hair down from any reverb or compression, or add 0.1db at 5024 for some more presence.
would prefer any abrupt end to the fade out end, that's just my taste.
again nice song / sounds really good

Best I have heard in a while.  Would not a change a thing.
 
And only 3 minutes !  Not 5 or 6 minutes !
 
great job, really liked this one

markno999
 Also, the Pizzi strings in the intro are a bit loud. 
 

^^ this ^^