BTW, me likey the song ALOT!

Lynn
Very, very clever and witty.  I like this mix and your vocal performance.  You have a knack for writing good, melodic tunes that fit your voice like a glove.  Nice job, Daryl!

Thanks a lot Lynn my mate.

The thing I enjoy about your tunes is you have a very distinct sound, lyrics that are usually funny or have a twist.
 
Productions point have already been raised so thanks for sharing good stuff.

philz
Cool tune Daryl, and superb production as usual.  Really enjoyed it.

Thanks a ton Phil

Lovely lovely! Really enjoyed it. Nice creativity Daryl!

synkrotron
No crits from me Daryl... That was a pleasant little ditty. Thanks for the lyrics too

Thanks Synkrotron - glad you enjoyed it.

Great lyrics...  loved it!  Production-wise it's exactly what I'd expect from you so need to comment. 
I also have to agree with Lynn - "You have a knack for writing good, melodic tunes that fit your voice like a glove".   Everything you do always sounds like it's perfectly suited for your vocal range and style.
 

Wouter Schijns
nice song and sounds great.
agree the left hats are a few tenths too loud, taking that down might let that vocal through enough.
they sound great, but personally would take a hair down from any reverb or compression, or add 0.1db at 5024 for some more presence.
would prefer any abrupt end to the fade out end, that's just my taste.
again nice song / sounds really good

Thanks a lot Wouter - advice taken - I will be remixing soon

auto_da_fe
Best I have heard in a while.  Would not a change a thing.
 
And only 3 minutes !  Not 5 or 6 minutes !
 
great job, really liked this one

Thanks a lot Auto. Very nice of you.

That's what I like about you. One never knows what kind of sonic treat one is in for when they click on your tunes.
 
 
very nice.  I like the groove.