Mesh
See what happens when you get a good reputation of doing great work........even us amateurs will start looking for problems (that may or may not be even there).....take it with a pinch of salt.   
 

ha - no, you're right mate. I heard it myself when I listened the morning after I posted it.
No ego here me old mucker - tell me like it is - I'll just cry myself to sleep again (just like most nights)

bapu
BTW, me likey the song ALOT!

thanks Apeman - love you too

Wookiee
The thing I enjoy about your tunes is you have a very distinct sound, lyrics that are usually funny or have a twist.
 
Productions point have already been raised so thanks for sharing good stuff.

Cheers Wookiee. Appreciate it

Rimshot
Lovely lovely! Really enjoyed it. Nice creativity Daryl!

Thanks Jimmy. Very kind of you

stevec
Great lyrics...  loved it!  Production-wise it's exactly what I'd expect from you so need to comment. 
I also have to agree with Lynn - "You have a knack for writing good, melodic tunes that fit your voice like a glove".   Everything you do always sounds like it's perfectly suited for your vocal range and style.
 

Wow. Thanks a lot Steve ☺

Very cool tune, and very very catchy. I really enjoy your work!

Luv it all I can say is Luv it !!!!!!!!!!!

Sounds pretty good to me, nice mix.  I agree the hats/shaker sound could be curbed a little with a Lowpass or drop in volume to leave a little more room for the vocal.  my only other Crti. is in the verses I found the synth pad that is shadowing the vocal melody a little distracting.  Sounded like an odd vocal effect at 1st, then I realized it was a synth.   Take it or leave it.  That's my 2 cents!  Nice work though!

Guitarhacker
That's what I like about you. One never knows what kind of sonic treat one is in for when they click on your tunes.
 
 
very nice.  I like the groove.

Thanks Herb. Really appreciate it.

jamesg1213
Very cool stuff Daryl. One of your best I reckon, top notch mate.

Cheers James me old mucker




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