this sounds good, as far as the mix goes......
sounds very influenced by action movie soundtracks,
and maybe a bit of 'run' from pink floyd's 'the wall'
it does come off more as a 'soundtrack', than a song.....
it switches gears in a way that seems disjointed for a proper 'song',
but fine with a movie type flow.....
this sounds good, but is not very cohesive as a 'written' song.
it's more like 'found art', where you cut out cool pictures of different stuff,
and glue them all on a large board to create a bigger piece.
i cannot really understand this sort of writing....
there is nothing that ties any of it together.
i think it would be much more effective, if you tied it all together with a sung melody.
just something to think about.