really neat song, lynn...
i think you need to add some clarity to the vocals,
they are just not quite present enough to come across.
i could just be level....
or it could be eq, like 6k and up.....
listen to it real loud...
then real soft.....
then make the changes, it'll be somewhere inbetween those two listening environments.
to me, this is like a cool cross between leon russell, and the floyd.