I get the comments about overcompression, but I think that's part of the genre. If you were shooting for in-your-face cartoony bounce, then you totally nailed it! I thought it was fun, and would appeal greatly to a younger gaming crowd.
Imagine listening to it with a controller in your hand, eyes glued to the screen, an imaginary you jumping over imaginary things, while irretrievable seconds of your life just drift away forever. Bliss! :)
So, I'm not a gamer, but I still liked your song.
cheers,
-Tom