beautiful guitars, vocals I thought
could not get a mix this good, still making some suggestions purely hoping they help you.
the freqs under say 60Hz sound a hair quiet to my ears.
would take off a hair of the snare reverb tail/decay
would choose a simpler kickdrum pattern for the start and Sensing Sarah part, on 1 and 3 and then on 1 and 3 AND..
just a super simple rock pattern would be my choice to add some groove/dance to the start.
Would keep the current kick patterns for the parts the singer is.
Then for the Sensing Sarah part maybe hats and closing them befor 2 and 4 or someting.
Just to add some separation between the guitar theme part and vocal part, and to put an accent on Sensing Sarah and giving it something warm/special or so (maybe brushes, or some synth pad...or percussion..)
Really Great song !!!