I listened to the YouTube version . . .
Clint, I don't think Sarah's going anywhere if you keep writing and mixing songs as well as this. Really really well done.
Love the Snare!
There are sections where the ride cymbal plays a lot but it's a very static pattern. You might throw a triplet in there once in a while on the bar.
The very end cymbal got squashed a little, you might look at that.
Did I miss a bridge? Then it WOULD be cool '70's in all its glory!
Holy cow, great song, love the mix, no crits from me there.
cheers,
-Tom