Played this on Mandola, acoustic 6 string guitar and bouzouki. This is the first one I learned playing sessions with the guys out my way. I decided to change it in the middle with an additional part to beak it up slightly since any place I've heard it played it was combined with one or two more reels or jigs, Additional parts were added to the basic acoustic parts.
 
https://soundcloud.com/st...e-road-to-lisdoonvarna

It's certainly a lovely beginning!   Here are a couple of hopefully constructively critical remarks:
 
The shift to second material didn't suit my taste somehow, though it was still mixed well  - the opening had plenty of material for more length.  Later, the constant doubling of melodic lines got old for me.  
 
But I'm approaching the sound from classical orchestration point of view, so take all with a grain of salt.

Tim,
 
You've found you "voice" and niche for sure.
 
Loved it.

Superb! Wonderful playing and production. Love your stuff!

Hiya Tim,
 
I'm listening to Road To Lisdoonvarna some more... This is a great tune Tim... Loved it

Hi Tim, nice tune and tones, well done.
 
Rik

Bert Guy, from the O'Dougherty clan, here. 
Yeah, this is really good, the real deal with well recorded acoustic instraments and a nice (flautistic) middle eight.
I like the drone of the instramentation.
 
Cheers,
 
Bert

Excellently executed.
 
Ah lisdoonvarna, not too far from the cliffs of Moher, the folk song made famous by Christy Moore.
 
Well done,
 
Cian

Very cool - really enjoyed it! :)

Tim, this is another in a growing list of hits.  Like Ed says, you've found your voice and your niche.