2015/07/17 11:05:58
Noisy Neighbour
Hi Folks,
 
I felt like recording a song the other day, but I just didn't know what to sing about... So I did this:
https://soundcloud.com/user9149108/superfluous-vox-up 
(Vocals turned up a bit on demand of 3 listeners. Thank you for giving me the confidence to do so!)
...critics welcome!
 
Best regards,
Daniel
2015/07/18 01:12:15
synkrotron
Hi Daniel,
 
You have a nice voice, and I think that should come more to the fore in the mix. It's not that far off, in my opinion... Just a tad more upfront would be nice.
 
Everything else seems to be okay.
 
cheers
 
andy
2015/07/18 07:38:59
Noisy Neighbour
Hi Andy,
 
thanks for listening and your review!
I've been writing, recording, mixing this tune rather quickly, just to get at least something creative out of a momentary "writers block" and get some more mix practice. I find it easy to loose perspective especially on my own vocal takes, so your critic as a "third ear" comes in helpful and is very much appreciated
 
Thanks again!
cheers,
Daniel
2015/07/18 08:00:37
jih64
Hey Daniel, I am just listening to your songs, I like what you are doing, your version of Bad Moon is awesome, and as andy said above, you have a great voice.
2015/07/18 14:21:15
Noisy Neighbour
jih64
Hey Daniel, I am just listening to your songs, I like what you are doing, your version of Bad Moon is awesome, and as andy said above, you have a great voice.


Hi Jeff,
thanks for taking the time listening to my material! Glad you like it. "Great" is a big word for my voice (blushing...)
In all the bands I've played I always did the 2nd part harmonies. I wouldn't know if my voice would hold for a 2 hour rock-show as a lead singer.
Thank you for the compliment! : )
 
Best regards,
Daniel
2015/07/18 14:31:48
bapu
More voice please. IOW raise the level.
2015/07/18 19:21:10
Noisy Neighbour
bapu
More voice please. IOW raise the level.


Ok, done.
 
Thank you for your feedback : )
 
2015/07/18 19:27:18
jih64
I've had all your songs playing over 3 times last night while I was just surfing the net and doing other things, with Superfluous it took until the 2nd listen/round for it to come home, but once it got there I really like it, and for lyrics which were 'totally meaningless' I think you done a great job with them, and they do certainly have meaning, nice bit of humor, well done.( are you really saying 'Superfulous' (note the spelling) ? I think you can consider your "momentary writers block" over
 
Bad Moon Rising. for me an instant winner, hands down my favorite version of the song that I have heard, love it.
 
Rewire Me, again, pretty instant attraction from the very start.
 
LAVALAMP, how to put it . . . my least favorite of them all, still nothing that I want to push the stop/next song/fast forward button.
 
55Blues, instant feel food , happiness, crack open a cold bottle and sit there smiling while listening.
 
Highway, a nice change and very easy to listen to.
 
Exiled in California, it's like an old familiar favorite classic song from somewhere earlier in life that I have never heard before, if that makes sense. The ending, sound effects etc are a very nice touch.
 
Sunkiss, another nice easy listening track.
 
SummerNL2012, I think it is very well done, whats not to like, it's like a journey, just love the lead guitar towards the end, very tasty. Very well thought out and executed song.
 
Smile Like Buster Keaton, When I first read the title I formed a picture of what the song might be like, but I resisted the temptation to skip to it to see . . . I wasn't disappointing
 
Really like your work, it hits a 'mark' somewhere inside. I think your mixing and production is quite good. Your phrasing, melody and delivery I find really good, both in vocals and guitar (that is you on guitar ?) You have a real knack with the lyrics as well, very good. All the little 'extras' you throw in here and there, instrument/sound selection, on the whole both fitting and well executed. Your voice, yes it is the 'G' word, in that for me it has a little something that sets it apart a bit from the heard, the tone, the timbre, the hint of gravel, whatever (I'm no good at describing stuff) I personally hear something like a cross between Alice Cooper and Robbie Williams, both of which I hear in your voice at times (don't laugh I do,) I didn't have a problem with the voice being to low, or needing to be brought forward, but maybe in Superfluous it could have been brought more forward, made a little prominent as the others have said, and they have far more experience and knowledge than I, so . . . Just looking at the overall, not trying to concentrate on individual aspects, I really like what you have done and are doing. My personal fav to date.
 
Can your songs be purchased/downloaded/straight out pilfered, in high bit rate mp3 or wave from anywhere ? I'd like to have a good quality copy of them if possible.
2015/07/18 20:57:39
thepogue
what a cool concept....you did a great job!
 
love the playing and you did great on the vox!
 
if I had one nit to pic it would be your vox seesm voer compressed to me...a but too squashed
 
love the lead...
 
great job!!
2015/07/19 13:10:22
Noisy Neighbour
jih64
I've had all your songs playing over 3 times last night while I was just surfing the net and doing other things, with Superfluous it took until the 2nd listen/round for it to come home, but once it got there I really like it, and for lyrics which were 'totally meaningless' I think you done a great job with them, and they do certainly have meaning, nice bit of humor, well done.( are you really saying 'Superfulous' (note the spelling) ? I think you can consider your "momentary writers block" over
 
Bad Moon Rising. for me an instant winner, hands down my favorite version of the song that I have heard, love it.
 
Rewire Me, again, pretty instant attraction from the very start.
 
LAVALAMP, how to put it . . . my least favorite of them all, still nothing that I want to push the stop/next song/fast forward button.
 
55Blues, instant feel food , happiness, crack open a cold bottle and sit there smiling while listening.
 
Highway, a nice change and very easy to listen to.
 
Exiled in California, it's like an old familiar favorite classic song from somewhere earlier in life that I have never heard before, if that makes sense. The ending, sound effects etc are a very nice touch.
 
Sunkiss, another nice easy listening track.
 
SummerNL2012, I think it is very well done, whats not to like, it's like a journey, just love the lead guitar towards the end, very tasty. Very well thought out and executed song.
 
Smile Like Buster Keaton, When I first read the title I formed a picture of what the song might be like, but I resisted the temptation to skip to it to see . . . I wasn't disappointing
 
Really like your work, it hits a 'mark' somewhere inside. I think your mixing and production is quite good. Your phrasing, melody and delivery I find really good, both in vocals and guitar (that is you on guitar ?) You have a real knack with the lyrics as well, very good. All the little 'extras' you throw in here and there, instrument/sound selection, on the whole both fitting and well executed. Your voice, yes it is the 'G' word, in that for me it has a little something that sets it apart a bit from the heard, the tone, the timbre, the hint of gravel, whatever (I'm no good at describing stuff) I personally hear something like a cross between Alice Cooper and Robbie Williams, both of which I hear in your voice at times (don't laugh I do,) I didn't have a problem with the voice being to low, or needing to be brought forward, but maybe in Superfluous it could have been brought more forward, made a little prominent as the others have said, and they have far more experience and knowledge than I, so . . . Just looking at the overall, not trying to concentrate on individual aspects, I really like what you have done and are doing. My personal fav to date.
 
Can your songs be purchased/downloaded/straight out pilfered, in high bit rate mp3 or wave from anywhere ? I'd like to have a good quality copy of them if possible.




Jeff,
 
I have to say, I really feel honored that you took the effort listening to the my complete soundcloud playlist and also commenting on each song. I never found the time to set up my own website and make my songs available for download so I actual would "exist" in the music web world. I also didn't feel confident enough about my production level yet but feedback like yours is of cause very encouraging. ( I keep you posted as soon as I got something ready for download).
Thanks again for your compliments on Lyrics (english is not my native language so I keep them a bit "naiv". There is a link to the only text video I've ever made in my signature below, so you can even check the spelling), Guitar playing (yes thats me) Vox (I don't mind doing it for the kids, ...scool's out for ever ; ) and mixes!
 
Rockin' regards,
Daniel
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