Real cool tune. Enjoyed all the different elements.

thepogue
what a cool concept....you did a great job!
 
love the playing and you did great on the vox!
 
if I had one nit to pic it would be your vox seesm voer compressed to me...a but too squashed
 
love the lead...
 
great job!!

Thanks Tom!


... yeah, I was staring at my DAW with this half baked project open and had no idea where it would go. I was almost giving up on it.
So I just decided to write down what I was thinking at this moment ("if I don't start now..."). The rest of the lyrics came together rather quick. The trick was to force myself not to take a break and finish them before I would do anything else.
I might give the mix another go and check out the vocals ...it could be that I had to much compression on the way in on the mic preamp, though.
 
Thanks a lot for your feedback!
 
Best regards,
Daniel

ohgrant
Real cool tune. Enjoyed all the different elements.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
 
Regards,
Daniel

This is one of the coolest songs I've heard in a while.  I think the lyrics are clever, and you have a great voice for pop music.  I like this mix as is.  Keep em coming.

The standouts for me in this cool tune are the background vocals (smoooooooth) and the lead guitar tone. Really really cool. Time for you to get a website methinks!
 
Your gritty lead is a nice contrast to the smoother background vocals!
 
cheers,
-Tom

Interesting concept turned into a really cool tune, and exceedingly well done.

Thanks for your feedback!
 
Lynn,
'happy to hear the song came across alright!
I should hang out on this forum a lot more to post stuff and comment on others, I just have so little time and energy left after a hard day at the office. I fell asleep with my guitar in my hand in front the DAW the other day... man, something's got to change... music is actually what I live for...
 
Tom,
Yeah, the BVs are always fun to do after sweating through the main vox. Can't get rid of the scratchy tone in my voice anymore when hitting high notes. Feels like a distortion pedal that cant be switched off.
And ...a web site is definitely due, indeed. Should be also fun to do.
 
Phil,
I had no concept to start with. It kind of developed itself. Thank you so much for the compliment on the execution!
 
Gentlemen,
Once again, I can't thank you enough for your kind and encouraging comments!
 
Best Regards,
Daniel

Very nice Daniel! Yeah, your voice is just fine, put it out there. Love the guitars in this, and the drums fit this perfectly. You've got some really great guitar tones in this piece...keep it up!
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Hi Daniël, nice one, quite a production. Love the guitars. Good job allround.
 
Rik

Hi Dan,
thank's a lot!
...Yeah, a big fat electronic sample for the kick, i thought this tune can have it.
 
Rik,
thank you very much for listening and commenting! Especially on the production. It's like a playground. Can't get the kid of it anymore.
 
Thanks again guys!
 
Best regards
Daniel