I liked it!   Clever lyrics and sung well.   I have to agree with Emerald that the background vocals are really good.  As a whole it's a nice solid rock song with a bit of a pop edge.   And the dub synth was a nice addition. 
 
 
 

stevec
I liked it!   Clever lyrics and sung well.   I have to agree with Emerald that the background vocals are really good.  As a whole it's a nice solid rock song with a bit of a pop edge.   And the dub synth was a nice addition. 
 
 
 

Thanks a lot for your positive feedback!
...coudn't resist to add a bit of wobble

Very cool.  Electronica and rock mixed nicely.  That's what it sounds like to me.  Really a good song and nicely performed.   That change at 2:10 is really great!  I think this is the first one I've heard of yours and look forward to more!  

Hi Warren,
 
thanks for the kind feedback and sorry for the late reply!
I definitely will post some more songs here ...'just need to get stuff finished...so little time...
 
Best regards,
Daniel

Daniel,
  This is a cool groover.  Your voice is great and I love that you went with what was in your head at the time.  The cool thing is you can always put new lyrics in later if you come up with something you like but I think it is cool as is.  Nice mix and arrangement.  What all did you play on this?  The guitars were great and I love the keys/synths.  The mix sounded great on my system and I could imagine hearing this on the radio for sure, nice work!

CreatingNoise
Daniel,
  This is a cool groover.  Your voice is great and I love that you went with what was in your head at the time.  The cool thing is you can always put new lyrics in later if you come up with something you like but I think it is cool as is.  Nice mix and arrangement.  What all did you play on this?  The guitars were great and I love the keys/synths.  The mix sounded great on my system and I could imagine hearing this on the radio for sure, nice work!

Thanks Tony!
I'm happy to hear that the mix translates well :)
I think I leave the lyrics as what they are ... what's said is said.
I played everything playable on this track. Guitar is my instrument anyway and for the keys I'm decent with the right hand playing melodies, riffs and bass lines (I'm not the classical keyboard player). The rest is editing. The drums I programmed with a little help of Toontrack's midi.
Thanks again for your feedback! (b.t.w i have visited your website, 'like it alot!)
 
Best regards,
Daniel

I really like your vocals a lot, and I think your lyrics are creative.  Overall I'd say great job!

Nice bouncy little tune, mix seems work quite well here, thanks for sharing.

seanathen
I really like your vocals a lot, and I think your lyrics are creative.  Overall I'd say great job!

Thanks! Glad you like it : )
 

Wookiee
Nice bouncy little tune, mix seems work quite well here, thanks for sharing.

Thanks for listening! Good to hear that the mix works!


 
 
Best regards,

I think you definitly have the voice for this kind of music. The mix is well done...my first impressions are that you would make a good front man in almost any rock or pop group. The playing and composition are nice as well. The highlight is the vocal . I kept wanting to hear just a bot more grit in the vox..I know...usually clean vocals are said to be best, but I think your tonality lends itself well to a more gritty approach. I'm not inferring that you sing grittier but that maybe some effects might make it slightly diry...just the hint of tubes maybe?