Uh, ok, love the drums, very live room sounding, and the hawaiian guitar treatment totally works. It's almost worth putting up with the rantings of shallow that thinks it's deep. I'd say your excellent party music is set back more than helped by his pseudointellectual drivel - I'd cut half of it away, because less is more in this case, in my opinion.
Imagine your song with less of him - I think it would be more fun, like your music! MAybe just a taste of his act, here and there.
Sorry I'm not more glowing in my praise :) really liked the music though!
cheers,
-Tom