Wookiee
You always manage to get a nice airy touch to your mixes Daryl and you are a lucky man to have such a talented lady in your life.
 
Thanks for sharing.

Thanks Wookiee - I am a very lucky man - she is a lovely lady too.
 

Guitarhacker
I never heard the original. So I have no point of reference other than what you have done here.
 
everything sounds good but I too noticed the sibilance mentioned by Tom. 
 
 
Good work on this song from the singing to the recording and mix.... all done well.
 
 

Thanks Herb - I really appreciate it - I agree on the ssssssibilance and will take a look

I really like the mix. Sounds well balanced to me. I like Bit's suggestion about Blackmore's Night. I love that band. Great job Daryl! Tell the wife she kicked Madonna's ass.

Great job on this one both of you!

bapu
Bass is a bit too boomy on my Sennheisers. Not a complaint, just personal taste.
 
Guitar is noice. Keys is good.
 
Vox is excellent.

Cheers mate - I'll tell the current Mrs that you loiked it 

Venus
Loved it!!!! She did great! I liked this mix too.

Thanks Venus. Really appreciate it

bitflipper
Why do you always say "the current MrsDaryl"? Makes it sound as though it's a temporary position. If I had a Mrs. who sounded that good I'd do whatever it took to make sure it was a permanent arrangement.
 
You should really consider covering something from Blackmore's Night. I think you could knock it outa the park. Maybe "Be Mine Tonight" from the Shadow of the Moon album. Give it a listen and see if you don't hear the current Mrs' voice in there.

Hey Bit - It's only an in-joke mate - we have been married 24 years this year so I believe that's pretty permanent!
I have to admit, I didn't know the band or song but you're absolutely right - she does sound like her. Maybe we'll have a go at it....
Thanks for the compliments

Finally got to listen to this song/soundcloud (on my phone) and you both did a great job!! Your mixes are really good and clear.....(listening to 'You won't See me').....well done mate!!!
 
I do like some of Madonna's stuff and this was done really well. Another one that the 'current Mrs. Daryl" and you might consider doing is La Isla Bonita.......not for any other reason other than I like the song ......also a couple of special birthday's are coming up in 2 weeks.  (especially if you have the Brio Percussion from Indigenus......heck, I'll even play the acoustic guitar parts (if needed). Get with the programme mon' and ride the island breeze....

Great job on this Daryl and Elizabeth.  

clintmartin
I really like the mix. Sounds well balanced to me. I like Bit's suggestion about Blackmore's Night. I love that band. Great job Daryl! Tell the wife she kicked Madonna's ass.

Thanks Clint. I will tell her :)