Hi Andy,
I am going to comment first then go listen to the track...lol
You said:
"I suppose I am putting it out there to see if peeps think I'm wasting my time with this project. I consider a lot of peeps here to be my friend, so I trust what you say, and if peeps think I should stick to what I know best, then that is what I will do. My PRS will go back to hanging on the wall..." Take the PRS off the wall an put it in you hand an play until you like what you get and tell all of us to shut up and listen...lol The PRS will never sound good hanging on the wall. And no it is not a waste of time to learn something new no matter how long it takes or what it sounds like starting out.
I, like a lot of people on this site like what you do and are here to support you in all of your learning new stuff. I know a note or two but I do not know how to create what you create. I am not Andy and Andy is what makes you special.
Now I go listen.
Cheers,
Billy
EDIT: OK no more of "I don't know how to play guitar from you"...don't make me come over there...lol
This is a great start and the lead is cool. If something gets out of time and you just can not get it in time no matter how many times you re play it, then that is what quantize is for. Timing takes time to learn and the only known way to fix timing issues is to play slow and build up speed SLOWLY...this can not be done with the PRS hanging on the wall...lol
Just do it Andy, and I am here to help you any way I can, so if you need help with the guitar just ask.
Cheers Mate,
Billy