Hello guys,
 
Would appreciate some feedback on this track like the first impression, the genre, the listening impact, where it fell short and where it can be taken or anything you would have wanted it to be but it is not. Here's the link below:
 
https://soundcloud.com/au...at-the-old-pub/s-DTa7l
 
Thanks,
Kane
 

Hi Kane, this is a nice idea for a tune, i like it, but the guitars are not in tune. sorry, don't want to sound harsh.
 
Rik

Thanks Rik. will make sure from next time round. the standard tuning right?

Hi.Kane, I don't know if the guitar's intonation is out of whack or not tuned correctly.  I was playing around with this and I keep hearing a little waltz in this, maybe an idea for you :https://app.box.com/s/pk9rfjwjew300qolk7r4byy9hors6nop
 
Rik

Hey Rik. I usually I go for a std. tuning. I guess my track sounds a bit raw. Could this be the playing or the recording or the guitar?
 
Both the tracks have the 'pub' in common in their names. :)
 
Thanks,
Kane

Hi Kane, difficult to tell if it's the guitar, the tuning or the playing without playing your guitar, but it doesn't sound in tune.  This is definitely a nice tune to keep working on and I really don't want to keep going on about the tuning, it's just that I find it very distracting.
 
Rik

Thanks Rik. will improvise on the tuning factor.
 
Kane

 Really nice and melodic minor phrasing. One thing to consider when playing nice slow melodic leads like that is to try to add  violin like vibrato to the notes, not bend up or down, side to side parallel with the strings. Work them notes. Overall I did enjoy this, nice changes,  melodies and on solid musical ground.

A nice composition. I agree with both Rik and Grant's comments.
 
 

Thanks Grant and Andy :) I'll keep the said points for my next project.
 
Grant. The idea of this track was spontaneous and its creation was just like a flow. I wonder when and where will such an idea or flow of music come to me again.
 
Regards,
Kane