Very simple so the guitar tuning is very important.  It would probably be pretty but the out of tune guitar just killed it for me.  Just one of those things that rears its head in recording.

Warren :)
 
After going through the comments and listening to some of the tracks posted in the forum, I really feel I need to work on the tuning factor as well the playing part. Thanks again.
 
Regards,
Kane

Kane,
  Nice guitar work.  At first I was thinking the odd tuning was on purpose.  After a bit I had to agree that it does sound like you are out of tune.  This one is worth revisiting once tuned up and adding some legato electric guitar might sound good too.  Just a suggestion of course.  Good luck and I hope to hear a new version.

I think it's out of tune, get a $20 tuner and strap it on there,  HOWEVER, I thought it could work as it is in a quirky funhouse kind of way, it had me thinking all kinds of crazy movie stories. So, when you tune it, maybe leave it just a hair imperfect!
 
cheers,
-Tom

Tom, Tony.
 
I think I will take a shot at version 2.0 of this track. As you both pointed towards purposeful off-beat tuning and playing with imperfection...ummm I think I am a few years away from it :) I wish to have such 'playful' skills some day. Thanks for giving it a hear and for your feedback.
 
Regards,
Kane