Well, here I go again, a total nit to pick on an otherwise great effort!
Your vocals are very well delivered, the drums I think are mixed very well, lots of interesting little conga, piano, and guitar touches.
However,
As I hear your bass figure, the first note is the root, in this case an E.
The second note you have as an "A".
I think the second note could be an "A flat" the first two times in the bass figure, which would be more in "key"-ping with your song. It could be an "A" on the last time, as you quickly move to the B that you hit twice.
Hey, obviously it's your song Gary, and I know you are a great songwriter, because I've heard a lot of the other stuff you've posted. It's always interesting and I can't fault your choices generally . . . but for me that "A" really sticks out, and maybe most people just wouldn't notice or care at all!
Just my .02 Euros. I always enjoy your songs, thanks for posting!
cheers,
-Tom