Lynn
You all did a really good job on this song.  The vocal is heart-felt, and the arrangement is perfect.  I agree with Tom that parts of the vocal could take a little reinforcement, but that's about all.  Keep em coming.

Many thanks, Lynn.

Sorry for not listening earlier...
 
Nice song, well performed and put together  
 
Just shows what can be done regardless of performer/producer location (or time zone)

I like this. I could just about hear this in a movie scene where one person is setting around waiting on the phone to ring....
 
Nice collab folks

Rimshot
Nice work guys. Phil, your voice sounds perfect for this. I would cut the first chorus in half (using the second half). Mix sounds perfect. I really like the bridge melodically. 

Thanks for the kind words, Jimmy.

Instrumentally was very nice for what it ended up to be. As for the vocals, they do need some work, but I'm no great singer. I think that once the whole direction is in place this will be a power hitter. It is heart felt singing, but needs some fine tuning. I'm just trying to be honest and not critical. Great mid-way point for this song, keep profecting it.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

great recording and mix.....I agree the vox could be tweaked....but that's true on all the tunes I do vox on...lol
 
 
good stuff.

markrounds
Nicely done the mix sounds very nice to me.

Thank you, Mark.

Yep you tapped into your good ol' boy channel here. We have all felt your message many times so it hits home with a lot of us. Nice, comfortable feel, and good production on this. Vocals seem a little tentative in spots, but its a new song and I can tell it's all there. Your songwriting skills are obvious and work no matter where the music takes you. Enjoyed the listen................Ron 

Nice work gents!  mix is great, bass is great, guitars are great, drums are great, piano is great!  great vox
 
it's great! 

Thanks Freddy.