really really great feel to this...
 
I think its' fantastic and moves so well...
 
love the bass....
 
A++

You are very talented and versatile, Walt.  I like the way that this builds up and the different textures throughout.  A solo would enhance this, but it stands on its own anyway.  Encore!

Cool tune... I really enjoyed this.  If I could dance I would have been dancing to it.  Good mix too.  Nice work, Walt.

Yep. Nice all around. Although it might have originated from that story, the tune itself I think leaves the story behind and jams out quite a lot! The ending works a treat, nice parlor you've got there!
 
I thought the choral breakdown in the middle very effectively whetted the ear's appetite for more of the jammin' groove, so kudos for that as well.
 
Your mixes always have that polished sound and are inspiring to me!
 
cheers,
-Tom

Very nicely done Walt and Paul. You did leave room for what ever direction you want to go with this or even as a background standing alone on it own merit. Very well put together and enjoyable to listen to. Great mix!!
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Great! Love the title too :)

 
Super cool groove! This percussive cowbell like noise is so catchy. Now put some melodic hook line on top of it.
Really good mood stuff. The mix sound spot on!
 
Cheers,
Daniel

Love the arps throughout, and the phasey synths moving around.   The choir breakdown is a nice change too and very different.     I guess the ending is what happened after the wheel actually fell off, huh.   
 

You know, it's really well done but it seems to be a bit repetitive, not to the point of stopping it.  I wonder if some BGV tastefully inserted in a few spots along with some lead instrument in spots.  Believe it or not, I'm hearing a rock fiddle in my head.  That's a place you don't want to be, Walt, in my head!  I like this tune.  You guys do it well.  Who did what on this?

I want vocals! 
Great mix. You might have a HP filter that is set to high. I can't get the very low end on my system. I would reduce the HP a bit and let this thing kick.
Without a lead vocal, could use a solo instrument. 
 
Beautiful work.