Nice song, no argument there! Love the Beatles cello/string thing. Great topic, too!
I would consider doubling your vocal, or doing a parallel compression thing alongside it. You have a good voice but it could be presented just a tad beefier to help this song. if you have something like Soundtoys Microshifter, a little bit goes a long way.
I'm guessing that snare is a very conscious choice! That's a bold call! Just for fun you might try something drier, less reverb, less kind of like a trashcan lid. But I think you've chosen that particularly so good on ya.
Your singing is the strength, I'd just trick it up a little!
cheers,
-Tom