Here's another new song that I wrote and recorded in Platinum.  Some of you may recognize Jacyn from the vocal section of Dim Pro, but the rest is just me.  I haven't played the blues in a long time, but I've been feeling them, lately.  I'm looking forward to all comments and suggestions.  Many thanks in advance.
 
UPDATE: remixed on 7/5/157
I cut some of the fat from this piece per suggestions by several people.  I hope I'm going in the right direction with this.  Thanks for all the suggestions.
 
This is remix #2.  I added a slight touch of reverb on the snare, as suggested by MGC59.  I also added the blues harp in places which was requested by several people.  DISCLAIMER:  I haven't played harmonica in about 25 years, so I didn't take center stage with this, as I'm no John Mayall.  I just hope that it doesn't offend anyone ;) 
 
Remix #3:  I brought the rhythm gtr up a bit, and I cut a little more fat (low mids).  Thanks again for your ears and support.
 
Remix #4:  (7/20/15)  Small change.  Some have said that this was heavy in the low mids, so I applied a multiband compressor at the mastering stage to smooth out the frequencies.
 
It can be found here: http://www.soundclick.com...ngid=13155061&q=hi

Fun. I'd bring the drums up a tad, and once you do, I wonder if your guitar in the first minute or so isn't coming in juuuuuust a hair before the drums give the downbeat?  The drums have a "behind the beat" swampy quality to them, I'd like to hear them a little more, and you might consider dropping the guitars and organ just a bit. YMMV.
 
Great bluesy voice by the way! Really fits the song, and you've got that growly thing down! Guitar licks are plenty tasty.
 
cheers,
-Tom

Thanks, Tom, for the suggestion.  I did bring the drums up a bit, and hopefully, this will balance the rest.  I actually wrote the song around a 6/8 MIDI loop from AD2, so maybe I rushed the guitar a bit.

Lynn, Sounds good to these old rusty ears, yet it seems like it could use some harmonica in there somewhere. Just a thought from an old timer. Nice vocals on this and the instrumentation fits right in to make this a Lynn bluesy special masterpiece.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

I love your voice Lynn! It fit this song perfectly. I like the B3 in there too. Overall great song!

Really liked this as well. Good sound and great vocal!!!   

Really nice blues voice Lynn! Nice job all around.

Thank you all for your time and patience.  John, I agree that a harmonica would fit in here, and I may go out and buy one to experiment with.  I appreciate all the comments about my voice.  I may do some more writing in this genre because it seems to be in my wheelhouse.  Thanks again!

Works well here Lynn excellent sounding voice, little bit more weight in them there drums would be nice.
 
Thanks for sharing.

Good solid blues number, and an outstanding job on the vocals, Lynn.