nicely done! I like this song!... the female vocals at the end could probably be a little softer... or im not so much into it.. at first don't click for me.. but great quality and your vocals are awesome.. really liked the changes and notes picked for all.. nice job!

Shawn, thanks so much for your time and comments.  It's the first time I ever heard "radio-ready" in regards to one of my songs   I can't wait to hear your new song.
 
Pablo, I appreciate you taking to time to listen and reply.  You may have a point about the female vocal.  Though I think it's a great sample, it could stand to come down a db or two.  Welcome to the forum, btw.

Lynn,
 
We should do something together some time. Give me a idea or two and I will write some lyrics.

OK, here's one:  things (or people) that live under bridges.  Good luck ;)

Hi Lynn,
 
I might like to take that one on, the people idea concept.
 
Song Title: Under The Bridge
 
Idea 1: Government protest song
Idea 2: How war causes people to live under the bridge
Idea 3: Drug addiction
Idea 4: Mental illiness
 
Jeezzs...This is looking like a minor key song...makes me sad just thinking about it.
 
Perhaps a positive spin on the idea....
 
Idea 1: Why I am happy living under a bridge
Idea 2: Escape from the bridge
 
Plenty of people living under bridges here in Florida. Perhaps I should go talk to a few of them and bring some things that they need like a kind word and a little hot food and cold drinks.
 
Got to put some thought into this one. Kinda serious project.

Think of bridge as a metaphor.  Nuff said.

tasty ax work and absolutely spot on vocal performance Lynn.
 
Great tune, pal
 
I did a duet with Jacyn about 8 years ago or so. Those samples are terrific.

Still waiting for the harmonica Lynn. Just got to be some space for the ole harmonica!! Sounding much better now though from the original mix. Nicely done.
 
Peace and Blessings, John
 
PS If you don't have a harmonica, you can borrow one of mine, but you may want to wash some of the old spit out of the reeds, because it could be nerve racking stuff!! HA! Just a laugh!!

James, it's nice to hear from you.  Thanks for you kind words.  That Jacyn really cooks.
 
John, there will be a harmonica in this song.  I ordered a D harp from Sweetwater, and now I need to practice.  It may take a while, but eventually it will be there.

Awesome job Lynn! You've got a real talent with the bluesy stuff you do. Like this one quite a bit. Bass and drums are excellent, guitars are rocking, and your gravelly voice fits perfectly.
 
Regards,
Dan