2015/07/02 17:23:11
stevec
It is a happy tune...   As Bat mentioned some variation would be a nice touch, perhaps some harmony parts to the guitar melody?   Either way, it's a song to smile by.  
2015/07/02 22:47:48
Walt Collins
I do have some Cure in my collection, but this doesn't sound like it.  Too happy. ;)
 
I think this one is great as-is, but if you want me to nitpick about the rhythm I'd have to say the biggest problem with the drums is... the lead guitar.  To my ears, it seems like many of your guitar notes are anticipating the beat slightly.  I bet if you quantized your guitar transients suddenly your drums would sound perfect.  Just a thought!
 
In any case, this is a refreshing ditty in your repertoire.  Fun stuff. :)  Nice work John!
2015/07/03 00:18:37
Planobilly
Liked the tune....So much music....so little time!
 
I could spend 40 hours a day on this site...lol
2015/07/03 09:53:35
Wookiee
Thank you Steve, thank you Walt and thank you Billy.  Quite possibly Walt I did pull the drums slightly perhaps that is another one of the heat related furry errors I seem to be making. 
2015/07/04 02:01:41
jamesg1213
This is nice John, a bright and breezy tune. Guitar melodies are memorable, and the tone is sweet.
2015/07/04 04:58:46
Wookiee
My thanks James appreciate you taking the time to listen and comment.
2015/07/05 17:20:56
Leadfoot
Good to hear one from you, Wookiee. It's a nice, happy little song that is very pleasant to the ears. I do feel like the drums sound a little "drum machiney", and that the lead melody could be broken up a little to sound less predictable. But I thought the mix sounded good, and Spacey definitely built you a nice sounding guitar! Thanks for sharing!
2015/07/06 11:54:50
Wookiee
Thank you Leadfoot appreciate your ears and time, well the drums are programmed SD 2 and I was struggling to stop me fur from getting tangled in the strings .
2015/07/06 15:20:08
mgh
Fobbing to Basildon?
as others have said, it's a great little tune, i agree with BB could do with some change in key or voicing. the drums are very 80s and need some work, but given you normally work with your analogue synths this is a great effort in a different genre.
2015/07/06 18:48:51
theguitarplayer
John, Nice to hear something soothing to my ears. Can only imagine what it sounds like to your fluffy furry ears. Fun jam from your furry paws.
 
Peace and Blessings, John
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