Thanks for the feedback -- I did some tweaks, and the final track can be found here:  https://soundcloud.com/ambientindigo/descent-from-the-house-of-time-1
 
 

I love the new mix...I think it is a lot better...really shines!

Steve,
Like Walt said, it is a sad piece, but that can be a good thing also. I'm more into epic than the sad ambient film stuff, but I may have some sad/epic stuff on my sight, who knows. I do how ever like the way you constructed this with just the right instrumentation, to give it the sound needed to go with the photo you posted with the piece. They work together very nicely. Very well done!!
 
Peace and Blessings, John

I think this can take me to other places! Nice!
 
 

Yeah, I listened again Steve.
 
I liked this a lot, so thanks for sharing 
 
cheers
 
andy

Thanks for the listens and the feedback.
 
Its amazing, after listenng to your own stuff for like 1000 times, how the only things you hear are muddy reverb, boomy bass, things sticking out, etc .... 

I love it my friend. I'd like to hear some kind of metallic percussive sprinklings here and there, a ride cymbal or a triangle maybe. Still VERY nice!