Hi John,
That was a fine guitar, bass and drums original composition and I enjoyed listening to it.
I listened on headphones, as always, so I'm never best to pass judgement on sound related stuff. That said, if I was to comment, it would be that it sounds quite "toppy," or "brittle," if you know what I mean. There is plenty of bass there, and I can clearly hear everything down the low end, but the high end stuff appears, to me at least, be a touch too high.
And I'm still learning about this anyway, which is another reason why I shouldn't comment...
Hopefully, someone with more experience will be along shortly
cheers
andy