Hi Kevin,
Thanks for your comment,
I will give some time to listen to your songs but there are so much to hear around there that I cannot tell you it will be just now, also I work outside so I'm not connected during the day,and I'm old fashion so my music computer is not connected, but I will find the time.
Cheers

Ok,
Another try on this one.
Comments are welcome but I think I'm gonna take a rest with this one...Kind of hard work ..Too much time on the same song and one doesn't hear anything anymore...
Also Sonar crashes from time to time and all the work is gone because when I get caught in the process,it happens that I forget to save( actually close the project and then close Sonar,it is the safiest way I have found to face crashes😜) but no problems when everything goes away,it is a kind of a karma and when I go back to it,the outcomes are generally better than what I lost.
Thanks to all of you for the help and the capacity you have to make me dig deeper than I would have done by myself.
Cheers
Olivier

Tres bien. I would not change a thing. Great song and production. The sound and feeling are really nice.

"Soleil De Paris" A great tune, mix translated well on my monitors.

Hi rimshot and ohgrant
Thank you for your positive comments glad to hear that you did appreciate the song and that the mix holds on your systems,
I think all selftaught "musicmakers" are facing the kind of issues I battle with ie it seems to sound in the monitors but as soon as I play the tune somewhere else the tonal balance is wrong,so go back to it bring one voice more upfront then another one disappeared ,so bring it back and it doesn't sound anymore and so on...
It is a learning process but progress are slow..
Cheers,
Olivier .

This sounds pretty good just the way it is. I can't hear anything that stands out as a problem or is distracting in any way. Great job!
 
Love the piano and guitar contrasts.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

Hi Dan,

Thanks a lot for your ...well I consider it as a support.

Cheers,
Olivier

Very good song.
 
I enjoyed it.

I especially liked the way you mixed the guitar and piano.The vocals are a fine addition to this french ballad. A very restful ballad with much character!! I enjoyed it!

Hi Chad and Tim,
Thanks a lot for your comments.
I will tweak the mix a little bit but not too much .
Cheers Olivier