hi,
a link to a suite of two short pieces in a kind a folky way,guitars and bass are"true" ones ,synths are played with old Rapture and Diva,percussions are from Dpro's expansion pack"Old World"played with Dpro and drums are played with Superior.
Thank you for listening .
Cheers
 
https://soundcloud.com/ol...2/pretty-lady-tina-mp3

Nice work, I like the overall sound.  My only criticism would be that the solo instrument (guitar?) that starts at 0.26 could do with being higher up in the mix.  It's nicely played but overwhelmed by everything else.

Hi Olivier,
 
That was a pleasant listening experience.
 
So, is that one track really two songs? One appears to finish at 2:50 and a more up beat, but shorter part follows, with different percussion. I'm not sure, but I think the bass sounds ever so slightly different too.
 
cheers
 
andy

Hi,
Thank you for listening.
Kevsmith81 you're wright,I will put the guitar lead more in front of the mix.
synkotron,actually it was at the start two different pieces but I found that they worked well together while each one wasn't enough to tell a story in itself.
The tempo is the same but it mooves from6/8 to 4/4 which gives the feel of an up tempo on the second part,but the bass have been recorded in one take( lot of rehearsal but no overdubs on this line ).
All the best.
Olivier

Vilovilo
Hi,
Thank you for listening.
Kevsmith81 you're wright,I will put the guitar lead more in front of the mix.
synkotron,actually it was at the start two different pieces but I found that they worked well together while each one wasn't enough to tell a story in itself.
The tempo is the same but it mooves from6/8 to 4/4 which gives the feel of an up tempo on the second part,but the bass have been recorded in one take( lot of rehearsal but no overdubs on this line ).
All the best.
Olivier

Cool, I will look forward to hearing it. 

Really nice guitar playing and take. The music begs for a vocal or a squeeze box though :)
 
I think I would give just a bit more bite to the drums in the 300 range with a small Q and lower the guitars slightly.

Thank you for all theese good ideas which,though they aren't in my native language,I understand easily and are really " feet on earth" if the expression exists and the fact is that when I do what you suggest,it seems to sound better.
Thanks again.
Olivier

The first song has a really nice feel to it.
 
When the drums come in, I'd give them more volume, particularly the kick and snare. And when they come in, back the acoustic guitar rhythm bed down a tad.
 
You have a sparkly and clean upper end, but the bass guitar and lower drums seem missing the punch I'd expect.. 
 
nice work! cool tunage!
 
-Tom

Quite pleasant tunes sound advice given above.

hi,
tried to adjust the mix following your tips.
 
 
 
https://soundcloud.com/ol...eot-2/pretty-lady-tina