yeah....very nice to hear the nuances in your songs. My Jenny gal is my fav I believe....;-)

not what i was expected...

i like the 'idea' of the 'is this what you want' chorus being so affected,
but maybe for only one line of it at a time.
 
i think it'd be stronger with 'normal' vocals for the majority of it,
and leave the strange vocal effects for just the 'hook' of the song.
i say this, because it becomes quite annoying after just one line.......!
LOL
 
i mean, it's not that it doesn't work as you have it.
it's obvious this is exactly 'what you want'  
 
it IS what you want
 
but, the song is cool enough to stand without the weirdness, you can't understand the vocals most of the time,
if you DID do normal vox, you could almost do a steely dan treatment with the 'normal' vox sections, with some really 'off' jazz harmonies that seque right into the 'strange' vox treatment.
 
just an idea, thinking out loud.
if i were your producer, that's what i'd tell you.
 

Well, as you say there ol pal, I want it to be annoying.  An Earwig.  A mosquito bite.  A recurring nightmare.  
 
And now, so does my ol pal J Peterman!
 

"let them eat cake!"
-elaine benes

i want world peace.......and a pony.
 
Quirky as a quirky thing in Quirksville, Quirk county - love it

 This made me smile all the way through. May not go down as a great composition but one thing's for sure. That's entertainment. Pro sounding production.

Smiling is always better than cringing😀!

Hilarious! I'm surprised every time I hear one of your new songs. AWESOME!

Whoa...   I knew it'd be "different" just from reading the comments above, but yeah, still not exactly what I was expecting.   I'll be hearing that Vocalizer effect the rest of the day. 
 
Crap... Now I don't know what I want.   Thanks so much.