Nice guitar tone, nice playing. Overall good mix.
If this was mine I'd start the track with just a perc loop and then bring the drums in afterwards to allow the track to build a bit.
Once it's built nicely, I'd drop the drums out at some stage and leave the percs (maybe even change the guitar tone to completely clean) to change the dynamics.
You could then build nicely to the end again and in so doing maybe extend the track a bit.
Just my two cents. The track has great potential and could be made into something really big.
Well done, Clint!