Good luck, Billy.  I may do a spin on it someday.  Today your link didn't work, but I heard a few bars the other day, and I like the melody and progression.  Watch out for that Muse!

Hi Lynn,
 
My soundcloud account is hosed up....just why the link will not work.
Also I am working on another version and will post it when I get a little more time.
I should be able to fix the soundcloud issue but it takes time. I get an email back from support  about every four day.
 

tried to listen Billy but the link was dead

Sorry about the link. My soundcloud account is messed up. I changed the link in the original post and here it is again.
 
A little heads up....this is just in the idea stage and I am now experimenting with a rock version.
 
The link below is just a one take no mix idea.
 
https://billyandlewis.ban...track/under-the-bridge

Pretty hard hitting lyrics there Billy...
 
As an idea, I think it's working fine... All apart from, well... I'm kind of expecting "is a living hell" to come in a bit earlier. I'm struggling to count the beats, but that's my lack of skill rather than your tune. I just think that bit between "Now my life," and "is a living hell" is a touch too long.
 
That said... I could get used to it, and we need to find out what the experts think 
 
cheers Billy,
 
andy
 
(I'm off to listen to one of my own toons now to cheer me up  )

for the love of all holy don't ever ever let bayoubill sing anything on any of your songs ever!