Yup. nice one. I'd bring the main vocal up a little. The snappy snazzy sassy snare/hi-hat might be brought up a little, too.
 
Your breakdown sections with piano echoing bass - really super tight!
 
Pretty cool trick to have a background vocal all tricked out like you do, very effective!
 
thanks,
-Tom

very cool Yorolpal - really like your voice - it's very easy to listen to

That's very kind of you to say Daryl, Ol pal. But like most folks listening to their own voice it sounds like mating cats scratchin on a blackboard to me😉

Just listened to this Olpal and yes, very cool indeed. Everything sounded really good on my H-phones.....loved the jazzy stuff (reminded me of D.L. Roth's solo big band stuff).