Yeah, I'm hearing the Floyd influence too.  The vocal is kind of getting a bit lost in the wash from the synths.... maybe needs some eq to let it sit on top a little more.

Thanks.
 
Phil, regarding the vox, was the issue in this version?  https://soundcloud.com/pjchappy/long-way-back
 
 
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cool tune...one suggestion...I'd update the original link and not upload links as you go along...I think you'll have better luck getting some feedback.
 
so yea this is very floyd like...which is fine by me...I think someone mentioned working in a change...I'd have to agree with that...
 
good tune tho!!