For some reason, I kept wanting to hear a jazz style, walking bass part kick in and maybe even run the course of the song.  On top of that, the song really made me want to jump in the car and go for a long drive with the windows down and a cigarette in hand (and I don't even smoke).  If capturing a mood is the name of the game, you just won!
 
Great work! 
 
Jake

Lynn
You have very good ears for mixing, considering that you use headphones.

I didn't see that one coming 
 
I couldn't even get past Bronze in that golden ears challenge thing hahaha.
 
I'm glad you picked up on the fact that, although it can sound like there is a lot of repetitiveness associated with this piece, I have tried to vary, and evolve it on its journey. Maybe perhaps a bit too subtly for some 
 
Thanks for taking the time to listen Lynn. Funniest thing is, knowing the sort of music we create, it's not always a barrier to what other genres we listen to 
 

Grizzlylip
the song really made me want to jump in the car and go for a long drive with the windows down and a cigarette in hand (and I don't even smoke).

Hi Jake,
 
Thanks for listening to my toon 
 
I think it's the length of some of my tracks that make them sort of good for driving to. And the fact that they can go on for a bit 

fun stuff!!...thanks for sharing!

Cheers Tom 
 
Thanks for taking the time