Daryl and I knocked this one out quickly with a little help from BIAB.
 
Play it HERE

Oh yeah, Dave Clark Five, not Journey.

Well that was different I have the dubious memory of Mr Clark and his four companions as they originated very close to my earth bound abode.
 
Generally OK, sorry Ed but the vocals sound a little strained, but I would not put a great deal of judgement on my view of vocals as I am definitely not expert or even amateur in the front.
 
Thanks for sharing.

Thanks for asking me Baps - enjoyed this 

Nice funky version ... Sound good clarity

Not bad for a quickie. Love the funky guitar groove, solid bass end, great performances.
 
Minor crit: The vocals for the most part is fine, though a tad wavering / strain, particularly noticeable in the change, where the vocals step up a notch.
 
 
 
 

Thanks Oh Furry Juan for the listen and comments.

Thanks drma773 
 
Wookiee & SongCraft - I could say strained is what I was going for. 
 
Anyway this was one of those that I wanted to just sing straight through come hell or high water.

Nice arrangement.  A British invasion song that doesn't sound like the 60s.  That's pretty cool.  I liked most of it but do question the sincerity on the vocals.  Of course, I don't know how I would have done it differently and give you props for doing it.

Thanks Warren.
 
This vocal was intended to convey a "whatever, darling. I give up, I'll do what ever you want". Is that the vibe you're getting?