@pjfarr: Thanks, yes it's me on vocals. Glad you like the production, but I may do some tweaking on some things in there later.
I don't have many tracks ready for the public yet, but all the positive feedback  for this song is very inspiring. I just have to finish my new homestudio first
 
@Freddy J: Thanks. Glad you like it

I like it. I think its modern, and your accent adds to the feeling of a contemporary pop. You did a good job with the mix. I don't think you need to have BGVs on every lyric though. Play with those a bit to get emphasis here and there and make specific stanzas stand out. "Wake up now" is really cute too.

Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it.
 
"wake up now" isn't my song, it's daryl1986's song. And it's a very nice song.
I'm not sure why it always starts after "lottery" on souncloud, but it may be that I've been listening to it many times myselfe.

Mix works well here and it sound like you worked hard on the production and song writing, well done, thanks for sharing.

One of the best songs I've heard on this forum. And I have heard a lot of good songs here.
 

daryl1968
very cool production of a good song Roger - nice one

Thanks daryl1968 
 

Wookiee
Mix works well here and it sound like you worked hard on the production and song writing, well done, thanks for sharing.

Thanks for listening Wookiee 
 

Barczar
One of the best songs I've heard on this forum. And I have heard a lot of good songs here.
 

Wow. That was kind words. Thanks a lot

Hi Roger
 
Considering you do not consider yourself to be a "vocalist," you have a very good voice, and I don't just mean that you sing "in tune."
 
Mix sounds fine, although I'm not really qualified to comment, as I'm not a mixing or mastering expert, by some distance. All the elements can easily be picked out and I wouldn't "tweak" a thing at this stage...
 
I eagerly look forward to your Kraftwerk inspired toon 
 
cheers
 
andy

synkrotron
Hi Roger
 
Considering you do not consider yourself to be a "vocalist," you have a very good voice, and I don't just mean that you sing "in tune."
 
Mix sounds fine, although I'm not really qualified to comment, as I'm not a mixing or mastering expert, by some distance. All the elements can easily be picked out and I wouldn't "tweak" a thing at this stage...
 
I eagerly look forward to your Kraftwerk inspired toon 
 
cheers
 
andy

Thank you andy.
When I get my Kraftwerk inspired song finished, I'll post it here first 

Love it. I also hear a 60s vibe (Byrds) in there. The references to 60s style are simply another way of saying - the writing is very good. The 60s was a period of musical innovation and experimentation - this song has it's own personality. It's well recorded too - good performances. I like everything about it. You're taking your own path and it's refreshing. Great job.

Mannynyagain
Love it. I also hear a 60s vibe (Byrds) in there. The references to 60s style are simply another way of saying - the writing is very good. The 60s was a period of musical innovation and experimentation - this song has it's own personality. It's well recorded too - good performances. I like everything about it. You're taking your own path and it's refreshing. Great job.

Thanks a lot. Yes I like melodic popmusic from the 60s, even if I was born in the middle of the 70s
All the kind words warms my musical heart