dcumpian
The solo way back like it is would be fine if it was effected to sound like it was echoing on a plain. Then you could add some African touches over the top of it...
 
Just a thought...don't go too crazy, lol.
 
Regards,
Dan
 

 
Dan, I opted to bump the solo up a bit and changed a few other minor things..... I have not changed the song file so don't listen thinking it's fixed.

BUT..... Joanne is working on a video for this and when it is finished, I will post a new thread with a link to the video.

Beautiful song & excellent mix Herb!! It was a pleasure to listen to on my headphones.....catchy too!! You should be in Nashville :))

Good production all around. Pretty harmonies and nice vocals on both parts. Nice message too.

Mesh: Thanks...actually this song is in Nashville right now.... and it's going to be the title track (I think) on an album to be released very soon in South Africa. Proceeds from the sale of the song and the album will be going to the Rhino Conservation Group there in SA.   We're hoping it makes a big impression and sells well.
 
Venus: Thank you.  Good to see you back around this place.

Excellent!  Excellent music, excellent mix, and excellent message.
 

Thanks Freddy. We're hoping the CD and this song will make a splash in South Africa when this project goes public. The co-writer has a friend who works with the Rhino conservation group there so we got a foot in the door already.
 
It's a good cause. I hope it sells well and does good for them.....

Absolutely beautiful piece of work all the way around. Very nicely done and a great mix.
 
Peace and Blessings, John

Thanks John... the video is in it's final stages of production and should be our before weeks end.... It's going to be good..... take my word for that.... I've seen some of the early versions.....
 

Lovely piece of work. I will be listening to this again. Definitely Vocals up a tad please. If I'm being really picky add a de-esser to the female vocals. Clever title and lyrics, catchy, tune is moreish, well done. 

Great song and really well recorded.
 
I loved the different keyboard parts. Good message for us all.
 
All the best,
 
sja