Hey, Glenn, Like the others, I would be concerned about the mic or positioning if the sound were recorded sounding like you describe; however, in answer to your question, from your description, I would think you have way too much 500-800 HZ—hard to be more exact without hearing it. Really muffled would be at the lower end of that range. Cardboard box would be at the higher end.
Is it possible that the mic input is way too hot, or that you have mic pad on the mic (-5, -10) that you need to turn on? If you were recording way too hot for the mic or input channel, you could be getting major clipping and distortion that could be described that way. Every time I change mics and every time I change singers I need to go into my mic preamp settings and readjust things. With a condenser mic, I almost always have the -5 or -10 switch on.
Tip: Even if you meter is showing the same level, a mic sounds different in a preamp with a -20 pad on and the level up than it does with the -20 db pad off and the level down. Someone will probably argue with me on this on an electronic basis, but I can hear it: more distortion with the pad off even if the meter says the level is the same.
UPDATE: Went to the site. I think you mean the Reggae song. I had a lot of trouble with soundclick but I heard a little. It does sound awfully 800ish but I am sure you will want to check all the causes listed in this thread. Did you say anywhere what kind of mic this is?