I think it's wonderful and not much to nit about. However I will say it seems there isn't much going on in the middle of the mix field. The ac gtr is superbly recorded...and waaay out left and the "delay" aspect of it is panned pretty far right. The drums seem split pretty wide too. IF I had a suggestion, would be to put that lovely guitar right smack dab center, and have some "ambience"...other mics, FX...whatever panned to the left and right of it. Same with the drums, but leaving only the kick, as one might traditionally do, in the center....its' frequency waay out of the way of the guitar. Pan the rest of the percussion accordingly. I personally like nice, wide stereo reverb, either noticeable...or not so... But put that gitter, up center, front. My headphones felt like they had volume knobs on each ear, and they weren't adjusted equal.
GREAT music... can't over emphasize that. good job!