Here is my latest mix after taking your suggestions.  I spent time on the basses in order to separate them and give them their own space.  I also tweaked the vocals and, hopefully, balanced the guitar tracks better.  http://www.soundclick.com...&q=hi&newref=1

Wow!  Big improvement in my opinion!  The bass is no longer competing with the kick (on my system anyway).  I keep waiting for the song to take off and "Let It Fly" with a driving snare drum at some point but it never does (for instance at 2:20 or so).  Instead the sidestick plays throughout...
 
Keep up the great progress on this one Lynn!

Thanks, Tony, for taking another listen.  I'm still interested in getting your advice correct.  Having gotten past the bass wars, I'll turn my attention to your idea.  One of the big aids with the new Platinum is the ability to try several mixes via the new mix scene function, which lets me try several ideas and save them under one heading.  Stay tuned.

This does sound better nice touches all round Lynn.

Wookie, thanks for listening, yet again.  You previous comments helped.

This makes me wanna do some buck dancing! Improvements sound really good. I would still like to hear the vocal a tad more , you have strain a little bit to hear it when the right and left guitars are riffing away. I like it though .makes me feet move.

Nice tune.
 
Left guitar (main intro riff) could come up. Seems out of balance with the rest of the instrumentation.

Monty and Ed, thanks for the input!  I made the changes you suggested, and I think they definitely helped.

Yup better. To my ears that left guitar could still use a db or two. It's just personal taste at this point I'm sure.

Definitely improved. Love it when both guitars come in, its a very catchy song. Well done!