OK... on the cans....
 
You should consider having that opening guitar on both sides.
 
Musically, you hit your stride as a band at the pre-chorus ( 37 seconds into the song) and it rocks from that point on. Nothing's wrong with the first 37 seconds other than the guitar panned in the intro.... it's just that the verse is put into proper context ... and when you hit the PC & the Ch it's like the straightaway on the race track.....open it up and let the ponies run....
 
At 3:13 where you break it down, I would probably have dropped the drums out and finished it acoustically.
 
Small nits....and certainly my opinion
 
Very nice work.

Thank you Herb, we appreciate the feedback!
 
we had been having problems with what sounded like timing issues, but after working hard on the guitars to make sure they were aligned we still were having problems, so I replaced almost all of the drums.  the drums weren't out of time, but the rhythms clashed with the guitar rhythms so they sounded out of time with each other.  this mix solved that.
 
I want to thank everyone who has listened and commented and I especially want to thank Sean (gtrpastor) and Mike (Makeshift) for their hard work on this song.  it's been a long road on this one!